Monday, March 30, 2015

In-Class writing

The incident that Lorenzo and his mom underwent was pretty strange. They were driving with listening the music called "Ancora tu", which Lorenzo started to hate later. Suddenly, the yellow Smart car bumped into their BMW, and the guy came out from the yellow car started to cry with kneel down looking at the mirror on the ground. He didn't say any words but just cry. Lorenzo's mom, however, said honestly it was his fault to make an accident. All the people around them stopped to watch what was happening. Then the guy harshly said cursing words to Lorenzo's mom, and Lorenzo began to feel angry and very uncomfortable after he heard that words and every one was looking the accident. Also, the woman in the yellow car contributed to make Lorenzo angry by saying something that was blaming his mother. Nevertheless, an invisible power was holding Lorenzo to make him unable to move. He couldn't undo his seatbelt. Eventually, Lorenzo fainted. 
This incident truly shows Lorenzo has some problem with controlling his anger. I didn't mention it but there is a line "I had to kill him" said by Lorenzo. He got so much angry feeling from the owner of the yellow smart car, and the people around him made his feeling even worse and emotional. He felt like he was going to faint. In addition, I don't know why but he wasn't able to literally "move", which made him feel bad as well as can't breath, so it might show that his serious mental problem or trauma that he had. 
Therefore, the song "Ancora tu" is despised by Lorenzo because every time when Lorenzo listens to that song, it reminds him of the incident which he had a lot of painful moments. 

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